overall looks good. but there is something bothering my eyes a little. maybe you could push your darks a little more. or your shadows are almost too cool. get what I'm saying?
Ah you mean the image kinda lacks contrast? Yes I get you. I tried keeping the most contrast around the character's face and out of the background around him so it attracts the eye more over there. More details + more contrast in the focal area kind of traditional approach. I'm not quite sure yet if I really like the style, but avoiding too much blacks in the piece keeps it colorful so we'll see Thank you for your feedback